Entrance

I have the terrible problem of one of the drawings being my 
favorite (by a long shot).  I call this one, Entrance. I find myself thinking why can't they all be that good?  Did I just get lucky?
1. This is a completely fictional image but it feels so specific and accurate to me.  I believe I have been here before.  The light is logical enough for me.  The space and how things overlap are clear.  It is not ambiguous. There is a sense of motion and energy but it is not overdone.  There is a lot of shapes but they seem easy to group and follow so I don't mind.  In fact, it could be said that there are only two shapes: The dark shape on the left, and the light shape on the right. If anything I would rework the lower left quad - the vertical highlight floats up and needs to be knocked down so it wraps to the shape below and transitions into the darkness.

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Here is the original, just a small doodle in my sketchbook. 

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